a friend you are to all you meet
a true friend you are indeed
sorry you had to be sad
my friendship will make you glad
I would like to meet you someday
in my dreams and far away
Author notes
My first (Rhyme) on AP.
My mommy type for me...
I loved the stories and Fi is my favorite.
A contest entry
- 209th Contest by Tarja.
600 points, ended April 4, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dalaney's Rhyme part 2 Children's by Sue Cardwell.
650 points, ended June 3, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Anny, I like your poem, FI
I hope you will always write poetry. I'm glad you have a friend like FI. I liked your poem about your friend FI, love Dora7
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I read Ashleighs story too and I think Fi is so lovely!! And this is a really beautiful poem you have penned to honour her and the story!!
In our dreams we can meet all sorts of wonderful people can't we?
Beautiful poem!
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An Excellent Poem
This is a very good poem, I have never read such a good poem by someone as young as you.
Please keep on writing and we will keep on reading.
Thank you for your entry in our contest, I hope that you will enter many more.
Well done on the Green trophy
All the best Sue and Jeff
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Frankly stunning for someone of your age. Keep writing.
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VERY good poem
This is a very good poem. This is a contest for new and young rhymers. This is by far the best poem by any writer of your age I have ever seen.
If you keep entering our contests I know you will win a larger prize very soon.
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Very good poem, learn as many rhyming words you can.. cat, rat, pat, bat, mat... etc... also learn how many sounds you say when you read each line....
a true friend you are in - deed
indeed is in - deed....
count the sounds in the lines and you get syllables!
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SO VERY SWEET
your sweet words flow with such a gift and inner kindness...to be a friend and to have a friend, ia a wonderful gift...you young lady are a wonderful poetess...please keep up the good work thank you so much for sharing with me and being so creative
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Yipee!!!
First one and you win a trophy.
It is very good.
Welcome here and thank you for sharing this with us.
Buddy
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Amera sent me this link and I am so glad she did, it is a beautiful piece. A great flow of words and the thought behind it made me smile. You definately a great poet in the making. Keep it up.
Love
Tory
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Aw, this is so beautiful. Amera sent me a message to read this poem and I'm so glad that I did. I have been feeling a little down lately and this made me smile. Congrats on the honorable trophy.
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A very charming poem.
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Amera sent me the link to this, and I am sooooo happy she did!! This is fantastic for one sooooo young!! I love it! Your words are very true honey!!!!
and love
Nyetta
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Sweetly said, most truly. I am glad to meet young poets.
If you would like to post your poems onto the poetry blog I run, you are invited. You can find it at: blogcentral.thereporter.com/planet
Hundreds of people would see your darling poems every day if you put them on Poetry Planet.
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I'm always drawn to the poems that can express so much in a few words, and you have done it well with this write. Good rhyme and great flow, too. A charming poem. Congratulations on your HM, and best to you in all your future endeavors. I look forward to reading more.
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This is so sweet, and wonderful for your mommy to type for you so we can read your words! ANd your Poem made me smile this morning! Thank you so much for sharing.
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Dear Aneka, the poet
Congratulations on your Honorable Mention. You must be absolutely delighted. A splendid poem. I'd like to meet Fi too. [I do know a Fifi, but that's not the same, is it?]Congratulations from Ron of the Winklings.
Your poem sings like a
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This is such a sweet poem! I love it! True friends are a wonderful thing; you can always count on them. I loved the last line of the poem. THe rhyming is excellent too. Keep writing, dear one.
Love,
Tay
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Bravo!
How beautifully sincere and honest. Aneka, you are a breath of beautiful fresh air. Always write from your heart and you will do well. You are blessed young one; truly blessed. ~Pamela
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Wonderful poem. The flow was nice, the content excellent and there was an innocence about it that was refreshing. I love it.
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awwwwww... this is so sweeeeeeeeeeet! A true poetess in the making! This was very enjoyable to read! Don't quit writing little one!
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we don't have any "fi's" here where I live, I guess, but you make me curious with your wonderful little poem ... you are already an amazing rhymer, hey, it took me a long time to learn how to do it, and you are just a natural !
promise that you will keep on writing poetry, young lady, will you ?
kitty hugs,
maa
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Loved it!!!
Oh, my goodness, can you really be as young as I've been told????? Sweet and exceptionally lovely,(and good heavens, the meter is near perfect!) I hope this is the strat of a long career in poetry! I loved it, loved it, loved it!!!!!
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Welcome to All Poetry Aneka
Sweetheart, this is a splendid poem. That means I like it very much.
Your friend should be so proud to be friends with a poet like you. I'm sure if your friend sees this poem it will turn a
into a
I really liked the way each word at the end of the line rhymes with the one in the next line.
Paul
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Aneka ...
your poem is made in Heaven. It is lovely.
Love to you, Angel.
Myra
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This is so precious, it speaks loud and clear of how much you love Fi, the stories
I hope you keep writing(getting mum to type) poems, wonderful words
Cindy
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What a beautiful start to writing poetry. I love poetry and rhyming and I hope you always will too.
Very well done.
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Oh Aneka! Your mommy told me you were a poet and that you wre here. I'm so happy. Your poem is beautiful and made me smile. Thank you, thank you thank you!
Love,
Amera
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Thank you sweetie so much for your entry! When your mommy told me she was reading my story to you I knew RIGHT AWAY that you would like Fi! I am happy that you like my story and I hope you guys keep reading! Well... be good for your mama darlin! And thank you for entering. Good luck!
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i dont know what a fi is, this poem is cute, i type my sons poems for him too, ( nathan7 ) keep writing and keep following your heart in everything you do, -Amy
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Hey my angel. I loved ur poem although mommy tiped it for you, i know that you did the poem. You must keep on doing poems I love it. I like the butterfly picture added toe the poem.
Love u 115.
Mwah
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