in your presence
the unexpected occurs
I become spontaneous
knocking down your door
in stilleto heels,
thigh high dresses
and come hither looks
that bring you to your knees
yes, I'm a fool
here to fulfill fantasies
yet leave you wanting
and yearning for more
unselfishly I surrender
to your desires alone
with no regard to my needs
yes, I'm a fool
A contest entry
- April Fools by Touchof1der.
525 points, ended April 3, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I rather be a romantic fool and bestow upon a lady all my heart has to hold with all poetic prose!
So I rather you be a fool than a lady that sees the world as if it happened yesterday and nothing from today that dearly wants to love another sunrise tomorrow.
Yes, I rather you be a fool.
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This peice is beautiful. I love the second stanza. very well done lace
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congratulations! you put the right words in this piece with ease.. excellent write!
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Hey Hey!
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We all have been this kind of fool,
The times we feel taken advange of or used. Then we feel theres a stamp on our forheands spelling "Idiot". I have had this feeling several times but theres no fear, the embnrassment will go away if you ignore him and dont go struiting up to his front door showing any desires. Your helpless on your soul then to put the stamp right back on your forehead. Be smarter and let it blow over.
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I truly admire this piece. Your heart is really out there, vulnerbale and you can feel it. An excellent piece of poetry, I found it it alluring and just a true treasure. Thank you for sharing this with me and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet. Good luck in the contest!
♥ Touchof1der -
i've been this kind of fool... or something like it and more recently than i'd like to admit.
hope you are well smoochie
best of luck
kissy
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