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Let's whisper it now.

I can’t seem to stop slipping up.
Let’s whisper it now.

I can’t seem to stop the tears.
Let’s whisper it now.

I can’t see to stop breaking.
Let’s whisper it now.

I can’t seem to stop craving more.
Let’s whisper it now.

I can’t seem to stop these words.


I’ve failed.

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 1

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    Lyrical flow maybe.. Like how you've jotted your thoughts here. Keep on penning on, and thanks for sharing you here. Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver