I wish to diagnose a loving dose
Sip hot tea, just you, me, and poetry
Two heavenly hymns, entwined tightly close
Fingertips tap upon piano keys
Petals upon roses, metaphors ring
Caressing your golden, indigo heart
Compassion soars upon this weaver's wings
And your sincere soul is beautiful art
Taste to touch, a rain-dance of romance sways
Through sweet whispers of the winds you bestow
Embrace divine lines, I'll love you always
And I shall promise my soul won't let go
Sip this cup of living waters my dear
And yesterdays sorrows shall disappear
In a list
Show me some love.
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Timothy -- I could sit here and type the same ole' comment and albeit that it would be from me -- it's simply isn't in me tonight -- (may be due to intense levels of sun rays that drained my brain and energy today) ...
However, I will proudly tell you that this makes me want to crawl into my bed of satin and read this poem again. So comforting! Absolutely one that makes one melt! Thank you for being you and bringing this masterpiece to life. My pleasure!
Your friend,
She-ra
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Oh wow... Such a lovely piece of form penned in dedication. Beautifully composed piece of love, with such unique imagery throughout!!!
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well worthy of silver and gold
you are poeticweaver precious soul
may God bless you in all you do
you are one of the few
on here
that can write
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This is better
and healthier Tim. Drink deep...
Jim
a fine poem.
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Wow,
Congrates on the Silver dad, and way to go with the weaving of the words. I'm sure she adored this piece, and I'm glad I have a chance to log on and read it. You are such an encouraging soul dad, and I'm happy to have you!
poeticpieces
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Beautiful are your words
That blend to perfection
Love whispers it delicate tune
Julie
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What a beautiful run of words...
Especially these...
"Taste to touch, a rain-dance of romance sways
Through sweet whispers of the winds you bestow
Embrace divine lines"
Wow!... now thats passion! Your excellence is your passion in motion my friend and you captured it here on this page... Wow! What an awesome effort and grace of the pen...
God bless and keep you safe...
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Firstly my dearest one congrats on the silver and secondly the write was of majestic beauty and soul for I know and have seen and felt your golden indigo heart as closely as my own that is bestown upon so many to give the many readers and myself hope from the strength of the love that shines from within you . the love you share is like an eternal promise - a gift - from the heavenly entities above giving guadance as you guide us. youe words of love and promise are music to my soul. You have penned another wondrous dedication spoken deeply from your heart well done and many loving blessings always xxxx
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What a beautiful sonnet, with such amazing metaphor and alliteration...love flows from your pen to spread love and beauty to all...always an uplifting pleasure to read what seems to drip with such easy from your pen...excellent work of love...
Best to you, sweet soul.
Love,
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Not only a well written sonnet, to an unknown, but your use of alliteration was splendid. The image I'm saving, as I play the piano and I also love red roses! "Sip this cup of living waters" metaphorically beautiful and sootheing at the same time. Closing lines, hopeful. Anyone wold cherish this poem. Best wishes!
Shana
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I haven't a clue as to the kind of sonnet, but this is absolutely beautiful. I love each and every line in this, wrapped together wonderfully.
Good luck in the contest.
Storm
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anothr of you beautiful pieces,i love this as I am sure whoever reads it will adore too,love sure puts a glow into ones heart.. thank you for sharing~ good luck
Lin
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"...And I shall promise my soul won't let go..."
...the essence of this lovely sonnet
and of you, the loving writer, Timothy.
Aesthete
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I like this... The sentiment behind it is so loving perhaps not one of your better ones as far as flow...but just a thought how can a heart be golden and indigo?
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Good Question.
A golden heart stands for pure heart.. indigo, a color of blue.. so therefore it's more poetic.. blue heart, can stand for a sad heart.. which I indicate here, and used in this piece. Thanks for reading.
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This is beautiful , it turned out wonderful such beauty and the picture with this write is wonderful good luck in the contest it is wonderfully penned
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Absolutely beautiful! I liked this part,(of course I liked the whole piece)
"Sip this cup of living waters my dear
And yesterdays sorrows shall disappear"
You weave this so gorgeously..is that a word? Probably not..hehe
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u sucker i love this i love green tea to i have chinese family so my step mommy always make me tea and of course i love poetry awe absolutley loved it
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