I’ve tasted tears trickled in vain
Dehydrated from lack of love
Tainted tattoos of inkless pain
Probing words from plagues unheard of
Withdrawn into my thoughts distraught
Repugnant deep sighs have become
Whispers of breath, butterflies caught
Now poetic fragments are none
Verses to chapters go unread
For who knows which way the wind blows
What is a weaver without thread...
Though I decline to decompose
Quell, while still quizzical of quotes
A lapse lingers, canny she wrote
In a list
Show me some love.
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i felt this pain believe me i have
im suprise this didnt snatch a cup but i know you did it out of deep passion as a writer
nice write Tim
Julia C
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We are forever moving through ...
changes ... whatever kind they may be. Rejection, deprivation and finally, decomposition, are all part of mortality ... In the spiritual realm these are soothed, and rectified.
Yes.
You've captured the sentiments well.
Love
Myra
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Love the wordage in this really like the first stanza but all are great. Excellent write
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oh wow this is a great write and this stanza write here is superb exceelent!
Verses to chapters go unread
For who knows which way the wind blows
What is a weaver without thread...
Though I decline to decompose
LOve this completly wonderful write thank you for sharing your talent with me
Just awsome wow!
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Very painfull and sad
Timothy, I can only hope you are not going through this as it hurts me to the core. Time does heal but I too am still quite bruised but so much better than before. This poem really puts me back where I was and to a point I can appreciate where I now am. Take care my friend. Run from this place and don't look back.
Jim
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this was amazing!
i wish you all the best in the contest love lots
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Excellent Composition---Very Very well versed in Rhyme!
Well Done and best of luck in the contest!
Favorite Stanza is:
"Verses to chapters go unread
For who knows which way the wind blows
What is a weaver without thread...
Though I decline to decompose"
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Wow,
Now this is a powerful piece here dad that will move the readers one way or another for sure.. That's when they get past how magical your pen is, and see within. Amazing, and you just keep getting better. And you can pen on just about any topic. And do it well I might add!
All the best in Angelic's contest.
poeticpieces
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Sweet Jesus!
The passion here is astounding...
and with these words, I have nothing more to say...
~ James ~
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goodness this so sad, but yet it is only in your pens ink,that shares what comes to mind for a contest you did well on this one good luck...Lin
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my dear one well done the sadness and darkness reigns within the lines of disdain. Like a whisper within the wind my tears fall searching for a ray of light and hope. I hold you within my heart and the image alone speaks profoundly joined within your words written by your mighty pen. many loving blessings always xxxx
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Really like this one.....I could feel the emotion
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This is such an amazing write. It is absolutely beautiful and with such stunning imagery. Well done and all the best for the contest.
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Amazing
first off i have to say that i love the write, and if you don't read much poe you should because you deffinitaly have a lot in common and i only say that as a good thing.
the poem in all just took me to a place where i don't feel so weird if that makes any sense.
"I’ve tasted tears trickled in vain
Dehydrated from lack of love
Tainted tattoos of inkless pain
Probing words from plagues unheard of"
definitely an amazing start not my favorite stanza but ill get to that in a bit, i just love how you started with this to show that you can start weak and get stronger and i mean that emotionally.
my favorite stanza however was the third one...
"Verses to chapters go unread
For who knows which way the wind blows
What is a weaver without thread...
Though I decline to decompose"
I truly love the third line which is not to be better than the fourth which just really completes everything,
truly a pleasure to read your work great job! -
my dearest brother, timothy, you only grow better and better through the months and years. this is absolutely breathtaking. i am so proud to know you. hope all is well. i wish you the very best of luck in this contest that you have entered, though i honestly do not think that you will be needing it. with all my love, your long lost sister, viyanna rosemarie
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wow.... you have wrote this very well and it is awesome. thank you for entering i loved this write. best of luck to you
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