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What Happened?

What happened to that kid I knew
The one with the bright pink paisely shoes

The one that skated and was living for God
But I guess in the end that was all a facade

Sometimes I really miss that boy
The one I met at youth group, was that a decoy

The one that made me laugh at the things he said
But as of today that boy is dead

He's been replaced by someone new
Someone that doesn't wear the bright paisely shoes

Replaced by a kid that just sits and smokes pot
A kid that thinks he's cool but really he's not

But I really miss that kid that never comes around
The kid that got lost on the path and never was found

And as this new kid gets lost in the wind
I'll just sit here wondering what happened

Author notes

I miss Kelly...
*sigh*

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  • HugsForEveryone
    April 6, 2008

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    aww thats so sad!! What happened to Kelly??
    Now I miss Kelly, thanks a lot
    This was a beautiful and sad poem. I love the form I see here as with a lot of your other poems.
    ~PandyForever~


  • moluv10
    April 2, 2008

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    This is sad. It is well written though. I feel as if i know Kelly myself now. I like the way you wrote this. Keep it up!..


  • Chrissi
    April 1, 2008

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    I MISS KELLY!!!!!!!
    it is so sad what happened to him, but in all actuality it is basically the same thing that has happened to me! I MISS KELLY!!!!! ='(
    This is a good write though!!!


    • xToxicxCupcakesx
      April 2, 2008
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      Its not really sad what happened to him because he caused it himself. No one else caused it so...yeah..


  • so L O S T in life
    April 1, 2008
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    ooooo i like it its really good it reminds me a lot of someone

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