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The book of love

If such a thing existed,
all endings would be complete.
No feelings would be fought,
each would sucumb to their hearts'defeat.

There would be no what ifs.
No questions of doubt.
Just sweet love makin',
and happiness throught out.

But the book isn't real,
and sometimes you still wonder.
Is this person the real thing?
or is it just a spell I'm under?

Makes you sometimes wish you could tell the future, huh?

Author notes

pretty much just rambling...

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  • chemicalcreated
    April 1, 2008
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    I really like it babe


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    April 1, 2008
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    Wonderful write!
    It flowed nicely!
    My only problem is the last line.
    It is kind of random and awkward to me.
    Maybe it's the "huh?" at the end of the sentence that makes it seem weird.
    Other than that it was really good!
    Well done!
    Keep penning!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker who lost all