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Tantalizing Illusions

Delicate, elusive and temptingly feminine,
This provocative beauty holds sway over her audience.
She captivatingly spellbinds with her alluring dance of fire.
Igniting the imagination with a look of leaping flames
Smoldering under denim dreams.
She awakens the fantasy within.

Sliding love smoothly down,
Teasingly slipping it over tanned, glistening hips,
She captures a sensuous fluidity of waves,
Gliding love to where prying eyes should never glimpse.

Wonder lives in pure fantasy of what lies beneath.
Dreaming with tantalizing illusions,
The imaginations of beleaguered souls take flight.
Diving into the realms of wonder,
They tenderly nourish each blossom of thought
With sparkling dewdrops trickling down.
Coaxing sleeping flowers open
They welcome a garden of wonder and beauty
While discovering a world of mischief and natural curiosity.

Hypnotic, priceless and flawless,
Her attributes will not be forgotten
In tantalizing illusions.

Author notes

I hope this is okay. It's the best I can do right now. I hope you like it.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Very hot and sensual words you did write...lovely flow and feeling of desires...very beautifully written eith grace...
    thank you for entering!


    • BluRosePoet8488
      April 1, 2008
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      Mystic,
      Thank you. I was trying to use sensual words without being too graphic. I believe I achieved my goal. You are welcome for entering.
      ~Donna~


  • Frozentearz
    April 1, 2008

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    Very soft an sensual within the words,
    best of luck to you in the contest,
    Blessings,
    Frozentearz

    • BluRosePoet8488
      April 1, 2008
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      Tearz,
      Thank you. That's what I was aiming for, soft sensual words, not too graphic. Because there is no need for that in this contest. Thanks again. Love and hugs...
      ~Donna~


  • Sandygram
    April 1, 2008
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    You have penned a beautiful and sensual poem. Soft and sweet imagery. You take care, Sandy

    • BluRosePoet8488
      April 1, 2008
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      Sandy,
      Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Soft and sweet, the only way I know to be. *smile* You take care as well. Love and hugs...
      ~Donna~


  • intanglio2ring
    April 1, 2008

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    Whew! Hot! Hot! Hot!

    I could read through those lines & know just what you were revealing under those beautiful denim blues!
    WOW!
    You were teasing to the limit!
    Best to you in the contest!
    Tang

    • BluRosePoet8488
      April 1, 2008
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      Tang,
      LOL! Thanks. With a comment like that, I know I have done my best. Cool down! Cool down! Thanks again. Love and hugs...
      ~Donna~

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