I see vivid variations
of our lilting love:
the pupils of my pulsing heart
dialate with dreams
& desires dipped
from the sugar of moonlight.
A contest entry
- ~PIF~ ::Quickie:: by PerfectImperfection.
550 points, ended April 1, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
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Beautiful imagery. Some great abstract ideas.
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Gorgeously penned. Simple and oh so sweet. What a lovely little poem, I really loved this.
Yum
creatress
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Beautiful. Simply put
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Ooooh this is stunning.
Excellent job here
best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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Such beautiful imagery and wording
in this poem! Well done and all
the best to you in this contest.
Thanks a lot for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826 -
Sounds Delicious!
Loved the line: "the pupils of my pulsing heart"
Good Luck in the contest!
Tang
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redonyx
Very sweet was expecting something rappy hehe just kidding Good luck with this in the contest
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A lovely piece of imagery to define the image chosen. Nicely penned! Thank you for your entry!
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