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Sound Of The Old Days

A symphony of hickory-nuts clattered,

falling from an aged tree,

rolling swiftly down rusted tin,

resting beside an old barrell.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Picture Prompt:

the beautiful picture above ~ painted by Randall Maynard

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  • shortyjo
    April 1, 2008
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    I love how you can hear this poem, not just see it. Really gorgeous description. Love it!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 1, 2008

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    This is so full of wonderful imagery. A truly poet piece here... x Thanks for sharing and many blessings... x Lavender Butterfly.