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[ Ooh...My, my my... ]

Ooh...My, my my...
Look what we have here.
A nice plump frame, delicious curves.
Your peaks!? Ah...they seem to be..
Hard from my rasping.
My craving, and that
wanting of your succulent, fuckable CUNT against my scapel.
Your intoxicating scent on my hands, your blood staining the sheets under that
Bound bottom.
Do you like...the feel of my rough hands against that sensitive skin?
(Aaaaaahn....mngh....No!!...)
Yes you do.

(Smack)
(Aah..no...don't don't touch me!!)
Oh, nonono...we can't have you, SCREAMING. As hot as that would be..
(AAAH--Mfpgh!!! MFHP!!!)
Ooh, god...This makes me hard.
Just watching you squrim.
Writhe.
Get bound tighter and tighter by those ropes, the more that
MARBLE BODY MOVES under...the right amount of pressure...
(A steady hand presses against that bitch's cunt, the scapel in the other
I have no thought then to go fuck and kill her)

Oh god, this is enough to make me cum
This lovely noise and the gentle hum
Of her screams, behind that gag
Oh, my GOD Let this last
I want to stay hard a little while longer
While I play with this little hussy
This deviantly plump set of DD breasts
And that glistening pussy.

A swift lick of the tongue against her bosom
Is enough to send me off the edge
Her smell making me high
The mixed stentch of leather, this bitch and rotting blood
Is enough to get me off.

A grope of the thighs and a plunge of the blade
And this lovely corspe is mine
She wasn't well behaved
She screamed.
She had to die.
Oh, me. Oh my...
Time to do the nasty...

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  • mental-not-physical
    April 16, 2008

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    GREAT JOB!!!

    ........... I'm speach less... That was Great!haha
    you kept things moving and good .... imagry .... no matter how good though still extremely twisted
    =) good luck in the contest!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Hehe a great piece, love the muffled effect. Awesome, good luck


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    April 1, 2008

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    HA!

    Damn fuckin straight this works!
    Exactly what i was looking for!!!
    I love how you wrote the dialogue between the victim and killer....
    and i fuckin LOVE the coldness in the killers mentality!!!!!!!!!! This is AMAZING!
    Kudos and thanks so much for your entry