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~Closer~

Missing image
Take me
somewhere beneath
   your skin

so you can show me
how to breathe;

and I'll be
   every part of you
that moves
                   inside out ~

if only to be
what you need...

Author notes

Picture is the prompt...
Found at Allposter "Denim-Girl"

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    How beautifully sensual and elegant...wonderfully done with depth and meaning...lovely metaphor...truly creative...
    thank you for entering!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Oh my that is just so sensual and stunning! So tasteful and such emotion in it!! Love this to bits!