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I Have Seen The Cardinal

Kingly in his robe, singing on his throne
of a wintry dawn waning into spring
Red cardinal, I hear your joyous own,
ringing true with cheer your song abiding
Call of love to nature, glorious ode
with a mirth, so assured of its promise
Red cardinal I hear your joy, behold
comes a flyer, she will be your solice.
Each morning's walk I hear his humble praise;
I lend my ear to whispers in wind's guise,
to a greater power, its means and ways.
Providence its nature a knowledge wise

Red cardinal, I hear your joyous song
To all that is life and that we belong




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  • Amera gold member
    April 3, 2008
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    Wonderful edit! You are a master sonneteer


  • suseann
    April 1, 2008
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    Oh my nature watching poetic souled friend. This is a wonderful expression of the gifts life grants us in visions pleasently suppied and costing nada. I'm always there watching in silent revelery the many scenes portraid in you poetry verse. This one is a joy to read.

  • Amera gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Beautiful, you captured the Cardinal and his magisty perfectly. I disagree with your notes, I think it's finished. It set the perfect image.

    Love,
    Amera♥