Darkness creeps over my whole being & my soul,
It has a tight hold on me, and it won't let go.
Not even a ray of light comes in or out,
no body hears me if I kick and shout.
It slowly spreads into my heart and veins,
I can't move, it's like I'm wrapped in chains.
I feel helpless as the darkness devours me,
my dreams, my goals, my whole entire entity.
I'm fading away bit by bit everyday,
but there's nothing I can do but wait and pray.
Trapped inside this darkness now,
there's no point in trying to get out.
If I'm going to die anyways, there's no point in trying,
this darkness that engulfs and devours me, I'm dying.
I await my my final days trapped in here,
I already gave up hope that my savior's out there.
So this is how it all ends, I guess,
I feel so insignificant, I feel so useless.
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A contest entry
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600 points, ended April 26, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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Its not emo shiny god. You always say that. its slightly depressing i will admit but its a bit repetitious. but ya.
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I didn't really like this poem :S
It sounds like a.... JIVE!!!!!
(for some reason)
It has a clapping feeling to it....
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Emo!
No offence! =P
But i like it! -
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Umm... thanks ????
Well I don't really think that way o.0
Cuz if I did.... OMG
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