she was a
tall glass of water
with a twist of sublime
and she went down
as smooth as Sangrini
though I melted in minutes
like ice cubes dissolved
in mid-summer
warm weather and wine
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Adult Sensual by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended April 1, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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and do you...
like Sangrini sir?
shall I pour you another?
let's get tore up!
great write handsome! congrats on the silver medal...this is worthy indeed!
your Muse is really slinging some great ink Tim!
Blessings! Tammy
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Lol. I didn't even know what sangrini was until the word popped into my head and I looked it up but I would gladly share a drink of anything with you as a mixer.
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ahhh...
I'll be your sangrini anytime baby...
xoxoxoxoooxox
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LOL Greatwell deserved silver
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I like!
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WOW! This is wonderful in metaphor and soft sensual flow...very enticing and inviting to the reader...excellent work...
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Thank you
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Beautiful Tim.
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nice...a good, fast flow with steamed (or chilled.lol) images. i like this muchly.
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