Dear Dad,
Everything wasn't lost that day,
your resolve helped us survive
Your strength during your struggle,
the sweetness alongside the shadow,
and the quiet heroism of your goodbye
Author notes
My Dad died (at home) from cancer.
I just wanted to tell him
how proud I was/am...
A contest entry
- dear......., by Nicolette.
1100 points, ended April 14, 2008, 43 entries
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A beautiful write, heartfelt and poignant. Deep expression of emotion. Deep expression of emotion. A moving tribute to your father. I can relate. My father died at home from cancer. Well penned. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest.
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This one moved me, Nicky.. I remember the day my dad died.. i was there too and there is so much of him that still helps me too.
A good poem, my friend - one i can personally relate to. I know he is smiling from above...
Thank you for sharing this with us.
~ Nicolette
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this is very moving...making me so wish i had a father like yours.
your pride and sentiments are palpable
nicely done
thanks for entering
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this is excellent...moving & meaningful..
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