Lost and lonely
Crying in the night
No one to hold
No one to have
Visions race through my head
Your with her
All cuddled up
Like we used to be
Does she kiss you like I used to?
I need to know
If that's why you left at 3 am.
After 4 years by my side
Why can't I be the one for you anymore?
I never tried hurt you
If thats what you think
Your wrong
I stayed up night after night
Year after year
Waiting for you
To get done at the club
I gave you my heart
I gave you my everything
Only to be
Left....
Lost and lonely
Crying in the night
With no one to hold
With no one to have
Author notes
Shattered, Broken, Wingless Angel"
In a list
A contest entry
- Break My Heart by Jocilynn Destroyed.
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I really like it and thats probably going to be my next name Wingless Angel. Its very good I love the commitment that you put into it.
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So much pain and sorrow... The emotion just flows from the page into my heart... You did a great job with this piece keep up the great work
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oh dear..i am so sorry for your pain and hurt!
it shows so clear through your words.
a great poem this is nice flow and such thanks much. -
A desperate searching cry of despair that is powerfully written with a tender longing that makes this poem a poignant success. Well done.
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Wow!!
this poem is sad, but i the same time i can feel the pain..nice job
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This was a very powerful poem... I may not be able to relate.. but
I FEEL for you... this was a VERY well-written piece!
Jack -
i am sorry you are going through this its a very sad poem this was very sad...but great write =]
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Wow...that's really upsetting.
That had to hurt.
Nice job captivating the element of emptiness.
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Very good I can feel your pain within your writing
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this is written with such intense feeling of emotion and it just speaks on so many levels that many will be able to relate to. hope your ok
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Why can't I be the one for you anymore?
I never tried hurt you
If thats what you think
Your wrong
yeah so this is really good i like the raw emotion you have captured here. im sorry you have to feel this pain keep up the good poetry though
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Too right many people can relate to this! Its excellant. I really like dit.. i feel your pain.. Nice job
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Sounds like a lonely and lost love song. Love, C
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This was a powerful piece my friend. In which MANY people can relate to. You hit it with strong emotion. I enjoyed this peice. I too have been wondering this side of pain for sometime...great job and best of luck to you.
Passions
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This was absolutely stunning and heartbreaking. I absolutely loved it. Thank you very much for submitting it to be poem of the day. I cannot promise when it will be posted, but it will.
Thank you.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Wow...
I know how this feels. It sucks...hardcore. I believe that heartbreak is the worst feeling in the world. The feeling of your heart being ripped into tiny pieces and stomped on in the process. When you get to the point where you can't stop crying and you have to hold your chest because you feel like if you don't then you will die from a broken heart...I may have gone over board with the feelings in this comment but I was just telling you I know how you feel. Good writem I love it. Thank you for entering and good luck.
Much Love and Respect,
Joci -
Beautiful write. I can feel the gut wrenching emotion!
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