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Forever Mine

When you look into my eyes
And hold my gaze,
You take me so far into the sky
I feel I could fly.
When I feel you near,
Although I cant hear,
I do not feel fear.
And when you wrap your arms
Around me I can feel your
Heart beat.
Every time I'm gone
I know you long for me to come
Back.
And you always patiently wait,
I know these things because when
I die,
From cancer inside,
I will always be watching you.
And when I'm high in the sky,
I will hold your gaze and take you away,
I will always be near,
Even if you cant hear,
And you should never fear.
I will come back and visit,
And when I do I will make
Sure you feel my heart beat too.
For our love is true,
And because of that I will
Be here,
Patiently waiting for you.

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  • Flight of Dragons
    April 1, 2008
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    Good Job

    Great poem, made me feel all fuzzy inside. Yay for fuzy inside!