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Dreaming of Blue eyes

I will always love you
However, you will never know.
I will always need you,
Nevertheless, will always stand-alone.

I cannot speak to you the love I feel
For I must pretend this love is not real

May it end soon
Summarily end this gloom
Please give to me
“I love you”
So I can say
“I love you, too,
Always”

Your presence enhances my dreams
Until I wake frayed at the seams
For reality will not love me
Until I am relieved
Of this secret I must keep

It will be suffice 
Merely getting to speak to you
Or seeing your eyes
Look into mine
And if you’re happy
Then my secret I will keep
Peacefully
For if you can sleep
Through the nights
Then I am content
Simply dreaming of your blue eyes
Looking in to mine

Author notes

"Believing in Freedom is just like believing in forever...You have to make it happen."

I don't quite know how I expect this to help your friend but emotions not shared or needed to be hidden gives more feelings in the negative than is, sometimes, even bearable. But just imagining that maybe one day they'll care gives hope and imagining that even if that never happens their happiness makes it not seem like your going through something in vane, which is basically what this is saying but then again, maybe that's just me making reasons for it to be ok. Anyways, I hope this helps, but like I noted earlier, I don't know how.

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  • Clinging-to-Life
    April 10, 2008

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    thank you for entering. i agree in how Im not sure how this will help my dear friend, but thank you for entering and for following my rules. i appreciate it


  • Poetic Obscenity
    April 6, 2008

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    I think it is absolutley amazing. =]] I loved it lots. It's really really good.
    You're an amazing writer and you should never forget that. You never know missy, Zach might just come to you again someday and you will be so very happy. =] I hope that happens for you, or perhaps you will find someone better a bit later. Either way, whatever makes you happy dear.

    I Love you.

    ~IvoRy