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Silence in the Playroom

Round and round,
This world goes,
Full of life, peace... serenity...
Until a child dies,
and all life fades away.

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A sophomore at my school passed away recently, more particularly March 28, 2008. No longer does the happiness stay with the 10th grade, no longer do the wheels of life turn with vividness; only monotony and misfortune will prevail with this sadness.

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  • Dark Otter
    July 10, 2008

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    Well done!

    My sophomore year, 1974, a classmate died of drowing at Eagle Lake, Young America MN. It changes everything. It did bring great sadness. I liked your piece. It brought me back.


  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    A very sad and emotionally driven piece here... x Thanks so much for sharing and many blessings to you, Love and eternal light, Lavender Butterfly.