Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

I'll [Never] Be Seeing You

Look at all this   
                  -CHAOS-

Flooding the street
  with *tears*
Such a TrAdEgY, it is.

    The sound of that gun,

makes the street stop in [Shock].

Now, three days later,
    all that's left  is photographs && your bruised skin to [[PROVE]] it,
                          Can't forget that GrAvE for you.

Can never forget that.....

    All those dreams we had,
now have shattered into little fragments...Left in my mind.


  To much liquor; To much disaster; I can't take anymore;

      Leaving me to anorexia; To bulimia

I see you in that coffin,
      the color drained from your face....
     
This is probably the first time I've seen your imperfection;
    You used to be SuCh a star,,,,
                    struttin' in [[Hollywood]]

I wish I could kiss those sugar coated lips,
      after you've had a piece of candy.

To hold those hands, that used to hold mine with that strong grip,,,

I can't be here without you,
and so I stand by your grave with my cigarettes.




 




I'll never be able to see those eyes of yours light up.....

                                            I [MiSs] you....

Author notes

Contest: Option 1.
chaos; tragedy; gun; photographs; grave; dreams; fragments; liquor; disaster; anorexia; bulimia; color; imperfection; star; hollywood; sugar; candy; strong; cigarettes; light

I listed the words I used. Hope this isn't to long. :]

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Candy Morphine
    April 1, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    ooh this is so good.

    it kept me in suspense that whole time.

    it all just fits really well.


  • Dead Star--x
    March 31, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    To much liquor; To much disaster; I can't take anymore;


    my favorite line

    its not too long its just right x]

    Dead Star--x