glamour turns to chaos
and dreams come crashing down
with ciggerette butts on the floor
& liquor bottles all around
1st class glamour queen
is now the Grade A whore
& the photographs all prove
that she's nothing more
her sugar-coated body
hides her secrets so well
her anorexic figure is so thin
that a double zero falls without a belt
she's a beautiful diaster
hiding her self-inflicted art
matching every imperfection
with a different star
she's been digging an early grave
a tragedy with nothing but a gun
she wants to pull the trigger
three
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two
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one
Author notes
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In a list
A contest entry
- Always&Never--x by Dead Star--x.
525 points, ended April 14, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Up close and personal (no break up stories) by Ntagatf.
350 points, ended September 21, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - come take a look! please?? (rhyming contest!) by nobodys-girl.
400 points, ended July 16, 238 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
IDK....tell me what you think?
Comments
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the ending of this is absolutly amazing. its dark and depressing but so amazing at the same time. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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i show you name on someone's favorites list and thought i would check it out, and i am not disappointed that i did, strong and sorrow filled words from a pen i guess knows a lot about it. a fall from grace, not the right words but the first that come to mind. keep it flowing and congrads on the contest, I'll be reading more of you work, that is if you don't mind.
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Wow! Chilling and well-deserving of the trophies it has won. You have portrayed the excesses of fame and fortune so well, and how they can change everything.
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Amazing
i love this. Your my first ED entry. you did a great job describing everything. Is this about you??? Anyway thank you for entering this into my contest and i wish you the best of luck. keep up the great work! -
way to unleash your soul!
That was a brillant poem...pierced us through and through, one of my fav. parts was:
1st class glamour queen
is now the Grade A whore
& the photographs all prove
that she's nothing more
take that you..cover girl models, that do not allow
our beautiful fullsome bodies to shine sexily through!
Poetess..would you please feature this in the Gluttons
for PUnishment group read list, we can now feature
4 of our current poems.
They will feast upon upon your brillant poem!
ears/Seattle well done! well done!
(plus-take a peek-new page too!)
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wow amazing way of writing it i really liked it
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This is most certainly worth a Gold trophy WOW!!
"she's a beautiful diaster
hiding her self-inflicted art"
Great ending and so true...girls like this usually end up taking their own lives or someone ending it for them way to soon.
"glamour turns to chaos
and dreams come crashing down"
Gosh! Great stuff!!
darlintlc
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Ooh got me with the gun part babe <3 Totally deserved that silver.
btw I'm sooooo bookmarking this!
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=Kryptonite Kitty =]
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Its amazing.
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wow this is amazing,,seriously amazing
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I love the count downa t the end. This write is very true. Keep up te great work!
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omg i swear this is the best thing i have ever read
everything just fit so well
and it was so well written =]
amazingg job
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i think you blew me away with that gun
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this is probably my favorite poem ever written by you
i dont know where you come up with all of this but im oh so jealous
x
Dead Star--x
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