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back to basics




 

i crumble like gravel

under bridge of your inked stanzas

 

 

and each word

sends me falling

to the bitter soil

of my roots

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • lalaland024
    April 3, 2008

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    i adore this!
    so short and simple
    yet complex
    there aren't a lot of
    people who can pull
    this style off well-
    thanks for entering

  • seek
    April 1, 2008
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    thanks so much!


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    Just stunning! A superb piece. You sure know how to write!
    If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
    Gaylene