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Dear Kindness

You can over exist
When she is gone
Right now, I am busy
in sweet altercations ,at times
September pleasures
with my kind other half.

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  • Nicolette gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    The lines my co-judge pointed to spoke to me as well - I like all the nuances they suggest.

    And we all have several halves, don't we, lol. Nice and very thought-provoking little note.

    Thank you for this entry.

    ~ Nicolette

  • grm
    April 2, 2008

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    i really like that thought:

    "you can over-exist
    when she is gone..."

    yup. been there, done that. lolol

    thanks for entering