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Trust In Truth

We determine
or interpret most
of what our children
see and do.

Teach values,
right from wrong;
what the difference
is worth.  

Share love
from your heart,
live in peace
so will they.

Show them faith
they will believe.

Trust them
and in their eyes,
trust is what you'll see.




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Prompt is this line: In the eyes of a child what is it that I will see? 50 words exactly

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    April 15, 2008

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    Trust given, trust received...raise a child with tender care and in their eyes trust is what you will see...excellent my friend, a true piece of poetry...niaish for sharing and for entering


  • Swan song gold member
    April 2, 2008

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    This is extremely profound and yet wonderfully poetic
    Excellent excellent write here. Dam good stuff!!!
    The corner stone of the family one might say.


  • Topaze gold member
    April 1, 2008
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    Very well written! A lovely piece! Thank you for entering my contest!

  • Topaze gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    Very beautiful and touching write that expressed the emotions I was looking for. Thank you for participating in my contest.