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dear wind




dear wind,

charm me with your song
of meager air and
bewilder the trees
climbing to the sun

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • klassy lassy
    April 9, 2008

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    Ah! This one is beautiful in its imagery, and I'm thinking 'meager air' is a wonderfully fresh way to speak of breezes. Be-wild-er-ed trees... what double meanings unfold! I like the personification and word choices very much! ~ Karen


  • Nicolette gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    I agree with my co-judge... this is a lovely and very poetic little note. I love the wind (and storms and rain) ... so this one really spoke to me.

    Well done - a good entry. Thank you so much.

    ~ Nicolette

  • grm
    April 2, 2008

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    often i've talked with and listened to the wind...
    sometimes thinking i could hear voices coming from far away or its own special music

    i like this

    thank you for entering

  • seek
    April 1, 2008
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    thank you!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 31, 2008

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    This is simply superb. I am adding you as a favourite. Your writing is amazing and draws me in completely... x This is a gold winner here, just loved it! Many blessings, Lavender Butterfly.


  • IntoWildSoul
    March 31, 2008

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    I love wind
    and your poem there fore leave a comment
    Climbing to sun
    and ending into breeze....

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