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~ In His Jeans ~ { Gold }

Missing image

Buckle leathers belt
Loose fitting twill
Bare upon her upholstery

 

Curves drawn to the smoothness of lust

Bronze tone silk skin

Revealing all

 

His lip bitten

Sensual to the bleed

Eyes fixed upon her abode

 

She smiles, beckoning

The glint reflects

Imagery etched, she teased

 

Enticing

Seducing lure of temptation

Desiring upon his manhood

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Denim Girl

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  • EasytoForget
    May 5
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    wow
    I cannot explain how seductive that is


  • Maxboy gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    Very nice and seductive.

    Congratulations
    Don

  • mcfreeman
    September 25, 2008
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    had me in stetches


  • Mat Larkin
    September 11, 2008

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    C'me 'ere ye....

    God Bless the fella who invented blue jeans...but God Bless the one who first thought to put them on women....

    Well done and very very deserving of Gold....


  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    Man oh man was this ever hott (so to speak) -- & lack of a better word haha though I can come up with many!
    Your title really fits the piece.
    Beautiful imagery & you use such words that really make it tasteful- not OVERly done and bluntly decribed so it sounds like a porno! lol

    Congrats again on the gold, this was just stunning!


  • Jonathan Wikkins silver member
    April 13, 2008

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    whew!
    is it hot in here? hehehe
    me tinks me needs cold shower!

    hehehehe
    great hot write!

    mike


  • GentleGiant
    April 8, 2008
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    you hussy


  • penman gold member
    April 4, 2008
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    Excellent

    Wow, so erotic. So deserving of the gold. Congratulations.


  • MysticalRayne
    April 2, 2008
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    Beautiful piece and well worthy of your gold - congrats


  • maralisa silver member
    April 2, 2008

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    wow julie hot hot hot enticing seducing lure of temptation desiring his manhood this is great x x marina congratulations on your hot shiny gold


  • In Too Deep1
    April 1, 2008

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    a very sensuous and enticing writ. I loved the flow and focus that has lead to a intriguing poem. Congrats on gold


  • aboomer silver member
    April 1, 2008
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    Well done!
    Congrats on the Gold!!!!

  • imahealer
    April 1, 2008

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    You go girl! Congratulations on the gold. This was really hot! "His lip bitten...sensual to the bleed" Damn girl! I'll have to practice biting someone's lips!

    Shana


  • sheltered
    April 1, 2008
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    Smoothly worded and wonderful.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Beautifully done in sensual elegance...bringing a beautiful lustful to the readers mind with class and metaphor...excellent work...
    thank you for entering!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Holy hell I wanna write for that pic!!!! hahahaha

    Excellent sensuality in this hun... my goodness *wipes brow*... very saucy indeed!!

  • Bob Fox
    March 31, 2008

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    Oh

    Oh the pressure. And i remember what you have told me. Salacious write dear lady. Oh the mighty pen makes the mighty man ache so. Hot baby hot


  • Age of Rain
    March 31, 2008

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    Very sensual and powerful. Your words bring the erotic image to mind with adept skill. Marvelous work as always. I loved this!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    March 31, 2008

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    WOW WHAT A PIC!!!!!!!--WHAT A POEM!!!!!!!
    This is awesome!!--Favorite stanza--


    His lip bitten
    Sensual to the bleed
    Eyes fixed upon her abode

    Favorite Pic on AP---THAT ONE!!!!!


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