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Dear Mom

Mum,my mum, our mum
my mother my bossom
the place to lay
my head is gone
and I am all alone

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  • Map of Stars silver member
    May 21, 2008

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    Awww this is a bit sad - The warm heart we were once so close to as a baby/child is pulled away with growing age. Though we never have to truly lose our connection through our hearts even apart. Nice write

    • Tercarro
      May 21, 2008
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      Thank you

      I wish I could say more but it's so hard to describe how I feel because the right words haven't been discovered yet.
      Thank you
      TC


  • Nicolette gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    Aaah yes... i remember my children laying against my bosom when they were smaller...

    Such a sincere cry this is - and very touching.

    Thank you for this entry.

    ~ Nicolette

  • grm
    April 2, 2008

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    yes...mums are the bosom of the earth and irreplaceable when gone

    so sad

    thank you for entering