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You are my bliss

A  million words could never explain
how much I love you.
A million times that I say I love you,
will never explain how much I really do .

So many times I need you
and you are always there for me.
So many times I needed to cry
and just let it all out.
No matter what it was,
you always said the words that helped out.

Gramma you are my everything.
The side that no one knows.
Without you in my life,
I just wouldn’t know what to do.

So  every time I hug and kiss you,
and tell you how much I love you.
I really just want to say,
that your love is my bliss❤

Happy 70th birthday gramma, remember age doesn’t mean anything, as long as you are  young at heart, nothing else really matters.
                  I will always love you lots and lots
                          your grandbabe,  Jasmin❤

do you guys and gals like the last stanza i'm not so sure about it

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  • VerminVomit
    May 27, 2008

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    when i read the first 2 stanzas i thought you were talking about a guy and then the first word of the thrid stanza was like... "oh..." ish...


  • fangs to blame
    April 14, 2008

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    I love the last stanza paperbackwriter the whole poem is wonderful.I need to grasp the love that you could so easily display and put it in my poems.But keep it up.