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Samantha

Your hair is a golden waterfall,
flowing over your back and shoulders.
My breath is deep and coming faster,
as I watch you getting bolder.

My heart is beating faster,
you can almost hear the sound.
I've never seen such beauty,
as you pull your Levis down.

You have done this many times before,
and it's such a delight to see.
And the love light in those bedroom eyes,
when you turn around to me.

I have no idea what I have done,
to deserve a Goddess such as you.
And the thing that I love most of all,
I know you love me too.

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    February 19

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    This is so sweet. I feel the love you have and the feeling of love recieved. Such a great write! I love this!


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Wonderfully done...lovely and loving, with a sensual feel to your words...beuatiful write of heart and soul...
    thank you for entering!


  • Desire gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    Wowzers!!

    Oh My Word my Friend You have brought heat to this contest
    Oy!!

    HOT~ and time for the fan
    Wonderful weaving of words and tale told
    alongggggggggg with tight rhyme
    Woooooooooo Hooooooooooooo
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~