Your hair is a golden waterfall,
flowing over your back and shoulders.
My breath is deep and coming faster,
as I watch you getting bolder.
My heart is beating faster,
you can almost hear the sound.
I've never seen such beauty,
as you pull your Levis down.
You have done this many times before,
and it's such a delight to see.
And the love light in those bedroom eyes,
when you turn around to me.
I have no idea what I have done,
to deserve a Goddess such as you.
And the thing that I love most of all,
I know you love me too.
P.N.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Adult Sensual by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended April 1, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is so sweet. I feel the love you have and the feeling of love recieved. Such a great write! I love this!
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Wonderfully done...lovely and loving, with a sensual feel to your words...beuatiful write of heart and soul...
thank you for entering! -
Wowzers!!
Oh My Word my Friend You have brought heat to this contest
Oy!!
HOT~ and time for the fan

Wonderful weaving of words and tale told
alongggggggggg with tight rhyme
Woooooooooo Hooooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~






