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Watching the rain fall

I feel like
walking on a rainbow

Reaching out to touch the stars.

I feel like
watching the rain fall.

Driving home to talk to you.

I feel

I am in love

and we are untouchable.







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Option 8: write about how you are feeling today.

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  • Samcat
    April 1, 2008

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    Wow! I love this poem so much! It may only be short but it conveys a lot of emotion and feelings!

    Good Luck!
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  • just mercedes gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    Lucky you! Untouchable, I remember the feeling...This reminds me, I don't know why, of that old song "Catch a Falling Star" Sweet and gentle write, I hope you feel like this every day.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    March 31, 2008

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    This is really upbeat and inspiring. I personally like the style and love the invigorating effect of this. Great job here.