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Fairytale Wishes

I paint a picture of my soul,
with words of my tainted youth.
I lock the door to my heart
with the key around my neck...
and I wait.
Waiting for the one with the matching key.
Can he break down the wall I hide behind?
Can he see the person begind the mask I wear?
Will he unlock the door to my heart and hold it in his forever?
These dreams have yet to be answered....
dreams of a Wingless Angel,
a Shattered Princess....
waiting for her Knight in Shining Armor.

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  • FransB gold member
    June 1

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    This is

    a fairytale wish - sincerely written- whether true in heart or not, but definately from the heart. Enjoyed reading its simplicity of wording, with images that match. Blessings.

    6th last line: "begind" should be "behind"

    Frans


  • Asylaarix
    July 24, 2008

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    I believe there is a man out there for you,
    one that will love you, trust you,
    kiss you in the rain, in the shower, in public.
    One that will make you feel as beautiful as you truly are.
    I love you kiddo ... and I know you will find yours.

    Ma