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Confrontation

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A Merciless storm beckons

Blue skies blackened by daunting clouds

Lightening bolts; rumbling thunder

The ultimate aftermath…

Massive flooding upon dry, red clay grounds

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A galloping warrior emerges

A courageous Centaur parleys to the storm

with his fiery bow held high

ready to battle the demonic sky...

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Vociferous winds bellows;

the mighty demon rebels

One flaming arrow pierces the heart of the storm

The bitter demon is silenced as the sun

Beams down to the face of the Centaurian

The noble warrior gallops off into the distance

Until nature once again beckons him

 

 

Author notes

Picture prompt;
Artwork by H.P. Kolb

16 lines



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  • Desire gold member
    April 2, 2008

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    Wow!!

    Oh My~ I did not know You have entered this contest too
    Sorry I did not comment earlier

    Magnificent piece You have penned my Friend!!
    Wonderful tale told and the images stain the Mind

    A galloping warrior emerges
    A courageous Centaur parleys to the storm
    with his fiery bow held high
    ready to battle the demonic sky...
    These lines grab~~

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    March 31, 2008

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    Vividly stark this is powerful and well penned bubs

    Best of luck
    ♥
    Stay safe
    I love you, always
    ~Manda


  • Errant Panther gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    very vivid imagery of fantasy characters and nature's fury colliding. lovely expressive language, I enjoyed the read my friend.


  • ShelleyA gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    Nice title. A good write and interpretation of the picture prompt. Very nice story. Good imagery, flow and tone. Nice depth of feeling. Vivid descriptives. Good word choice, alliteration and assonance. Thank you for your entry.

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