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Random love poem

I stare deep into your beautiful hazel lit eyes,
Where I can see the love we share elegantly entwined,
I embrace you gently pulling you nearer to my heart,
Hugging you softly, I've loved you from the start,
My lips find yours as we express how we feel,
Loving you makes my world seem ever so real,
I wish this moment could just last forever,
Kissing you being my one and only pleasure,
All I ever want is you in my arms,
I'm becoming victim to every single one of your charms,
I love you so much, more than the life that I live,
And my beating heart to you I forever give.






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  • microwave
    September 14
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    sweet
    :]

  • xrainbowxheartsx
    September 7
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    that was pretty

  • word20dragon
    September 5

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    Feeling The Love

    I am feeling the love in this write. I see the person with hazel eyes your in your arms wraped around her, falling in love wanting to give her everything not wanting nothing in return except her exceptance and love. Great Great write

  • that was a awesome poem kinda how I feel about my boyfriend and I lol


  • deadwithin
    August 26

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    hey i know i have read this before but i cant stop reading it lol and Jody is with me and yea she says that she gonna make fun of u the next time she talks to you so hahha!!! -ashley

  • xXreinaXx
    August 24
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    WoW this is really beautiful and heartfelt....i love how you put so much thought into it


  • Meggie Smith
    August 24
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    awwwww

    this poem is very good and it shows that u care bout somebody....deeply?

  • holy shoot!

    this is like really cute andd amazing.
    like on the reals david.
    yr an amazing writer kiddo; :]


  • Badmemory
    August 20
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    Awsome

    I loved the poem, made me think of the one i love

  • xxAimeexx
    August 19
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    awwwwwwwww

  • awwwwwwwwwwww

    soooooooo cute!!!!!!!!! i luved all of it!!my fave part, if u must ask, is
    the 3 & 4 lines.... sooo sweet.


  • madlove4you
    August 9
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    Amazing poem i love it good job

  • wow this took my breath away
    its so beautiful
    it almost made me cry
    its amazing
    keep going at it
  • This is completely amazing ^^ it is a very in depth love poem. it made me feel your emotion ^^

  • Hinata
    August 2

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    OOOOOOOOOO!i love it!well since everyone already said wat i would also write in this comment and no sense in copying them.so all the comments below...I AGREE!cause i like it![u can tell me "ty for ur comment" now.hehe]

    leslie

  • I think whoever you wrote this about is truely lucky.
    Amazing write.

  • wow

    bro this is so amazing i love it so much...i mean this works in so many ways with my bf and i.....wow you're amazing i love ya big bro
  • This is really good I like it alot.

    Sarah


  • forever love
    July 21
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    oh wow. this was amazing. Every word a great way to express how you feel about her. Very Good ^^

  • amazing. it had me engrossed straight through to the end.
    great write.

  • wow. tht was amzing i added u as one of my favs so.. yea,but wow, a perfect way to put it
  • Beautiful!

    This was absolutely beautiful and amazing....I loved this piece! Me and my best friend Mishay can REALLY relate to this....I love the emotion put into this poem...Keep up your beautiful work!!

    ~Kayla~

  • Wonderful write. It was lovely. Full of love. =) I hope to read more from you. I hope you continue writing excellent poetry.

  • awesome

    I like your poem

  • OMG!!!!

    I added you as one of my favs so please add me!!!

    This sounds just like the way I feel about my man Josh. He has hazel eyes and I never want 2 let him go!!!SmileSurprised!!!!!!

  • I totally agree with " A Faded Memory".. this poem is amazing.. and whoever it's written for is the luckiest person on this entire planet..This poem is just beautiful.


  • Sweaters
    June 25

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    This poem is sweet. I wish a boy would write a poem like this about me but no one likes me. No one ever will. Great write.
  • lienluc
    June 24
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    excellent

    i tink dis is deadly
  • wow this is really
    good and beautiful poem
    you did a great job on it
    and i loved it great work
    keep it up

    ~brookeann~
  • I love this one, its beautiful, whoever its for is lucky! *claps*
  • I have hazel eyes. But great poem. Its really beautiful, i love it. keep up the great work.




  • Sammoura
    June 14

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    yay! i love it.
    i loved mostly "My lips find yours as we express how we feel,
    Loving you makes my world seem ever so real,"
    and
    "I love you so much, more than the life that I live,
    And my beating heart to you I forever give."
    keep up the good stuff!


  • LustForDeath
    June 13
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    Wow that is really good it is so sweet well done =] x


  • deadwithin
    June 12
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    oh my god!wow i love it if a guy did this for me i would die! -ashley (deadwithin)

  • PodoPaloma
    June 9

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    Wow, great poem!
    I can't explain how this made me feel because it's just so perfect in so many ways.
    The words glided off the page so nicely, and I love it.

    "I embrace you gently pulling you nearer to my heart,
    Hugging you softly, I've loved you from the start,
    My lips find yours as we express how we feel,
    Loving you makes my world seem ever so real,"

    I love that part because it's so descriptive.
    I don't find this write cliche at all, because it seems real - it seems like I've felt exactly what you've described. Probably because I have lol

    You did an amazing job with this.
    It seriously rocked. <3

    sincerely,
    dovey~

  • OMG! this was wonderful! one of the best love poems i've read in a long long time! its a very lovely one i have to say... and your metaphors left me breathless! >.< Great job! LOVED IT! keep writing!

    ~RANJI

  • wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! I loved it... I kinda need some inspiration based on lovy dovy stuff so it kinda gave me an idea yay!
    great write and another thing by what I read in your profile i kinda like you... your drawings are amazing... that rose is hot... anywyas windering if you wanna be in my Ap fam?

  • woow

    wow hey lost emo its me shelby aka lilac (real name is lilac) that is such a good poem. you need to write more like that. that made me want to cry. hey talk to me k. i still hyper!!!

  • That is sweet!!!!
    I like the rhyming...it's really good.

  • Sun-shiney
    June 4
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    so so so beautiful even the second time it leaves me brethless wishing to fall into my boys arms. im not even going to try to move right now. .

  • siomagrl14
    June 3
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    amazing

    that was so beutiful. there were many feelings. just beutiful!!
  • this poem is so enthralling- i just loved how you peiced it together, and made it seem like a romantic story- you could see things happening, and feel the warmth of this whole write~ it actually made me feel fuzzy on the inside for a second there....lol ^.^ i give you many clappy hands!

  • ukilledme
    May 31
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    i loved it !!!!!

    i love this poem it is definetly 1 of my favorites i love the way u captured the love in that poem
  • hey this is a really good poem... so sweet.

  • lol my eyes are hazel!!!!
    <----------ME
    i hate it!
  • thats really good

  • faerie
    May 29
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    This gives me chills, sooo beautiful....

  • omg this is incredable it deservee to win hands down you really know how to write great stuff keep it up
    btw this poem deserves about a million applauses


  • kitty23
    May 28

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    omg
    that was so good
    very imagery
    i like this so much how id this peom about?
    thank you for sharing this poem with me
    keep up the great work
    kitty23


  • deadwithin
    May 28
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    that is really good. i would aplaude it but i have none.
  • very good

    i like it it is very emotional i love your imagrey..."love we share elegantly entwined" .. i love this line it just speaks to me... so vey good... ^.^

  • awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
    this is soo cute
    bahahaha
    =]]
    fantastic
  • wow, beautiful!
  • wow bro....you are so awsome and this is beautiful..I love it and the girl this is for must be lucky...wow i wish my bf was this sweet...i know maybe you could give him some pointers lol love u
  • yay

    awwwww, pretty ^^ *clap clap*


  • liaanne
    May 25
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    This is absolutley beautiful. I love your work. Keep it up

  • i like it all my love poems are about how bad my relationships have been

  • awww

    aww....dam this is a sweet adorable poem....who was it written to????? idk but GOOD JOB!!!!-GOREgous Gore .... BTW your cute
  • wow this is really really good,
    the structure and form, and well vocab used,
    is simply magnificent and heartfelt,
    keep up the good writings,
    all my love, kitty
    *hug
  • Awwww super sweet..
    I love it!...
    Keep up the great write!

    =]]
  • A very romantic poem
    ^_^
  • lover4ever
    May 21
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    I love it you are good

  • wow i love it its soo romantic and sweet. one of my top five favorites
  • hey that really is sweet i like how you worded every thing