You say say you love me,
but its all a lie.
You told me I was your everything,
so why did you end it?
Now you tell me its best just to be friends,
but I know that thats not the real reason.
The girl you're with now,
is she what you wanted?
Of course she is,
with her tight shirts and skimpy skirts.
She's the real reason you broke my heart.
I wasn't moving fast enough for you,
and you weren't happy enough.
That skank just gives it up like its her job.
Do you really think she loves you,
like I did?
Or is she just using you,
like you're using her?
All you wanted was a little ass,
and more chest.
I had morals.
I wasn't just gonna let you have it.
Now I know that you were just using me,
wanted to get something from a hot chick.
Personally I think you're desperate,
because that bitch is a total slut,
and she's nasty.
Well I hope you get what you wanted,
before that whore breaks up with you for another guy,
like you did with me.
No, I'm not really pissed.
I just think you're an idiot.
Maybe an asshole too,
but thats just my opinion.
I don't know what I ever saw in you.
A contest entry
- -Don't shoot me, I didn't ask for this.- (Relationship poems.) by Livingemptyspaces.
1200 points, ended September 24, 43 entries
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To harsh?
Comments
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hmmmmmmmmm
Now that I re-read this Brit...well
idk
it seems...
lacking something.
i know you never get on anymore,
so you'll probably never get this commetn anyways.
I really think that you could probably add more to this, but you never will...wil you.
Oh well...
things change right?
And I partly commented again because I miss reading your writing, Brit, I really do....
oh well.
ily
Liz.......
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Not Harsh Enough!!
BRILLIANTLY PUT!!!
I agree with you Brit!!! He's all of those things(no offense, but...). I can say those things because I know him!!(lolz)
I'm sorry Brit...but i Warned you about him...
This is you're only screwup! Jhonna had hers, and you have yours...only 1!
Next time we'll tie you up to a chair and lock you in a fuckin closet!(pardone my French)...
Keep venting Brit!!!
ILY
Your Flower Sister,
Lizzy/Annie
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Do you know who this is Brit?
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brit...brit...brit...
happy u got on tho! lolz, message me when you finish it!!
i wrote a new one titled: "I'm Sorry..."
see if u can read it soon!
~Annie
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