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please dont tell me goodbye

My hearts breaking
I feel as if im standing on the edge
the cliff no longer continues

I dont want another good bye
theres no way i can do it
I cant handle you walking away again

The feeling of you saying goodbye
eats me up
It makes me feel as if i ment nothing
that it was all just a joke anyway
and i put in way to much effort

No please I ask
not this time
we can make this work
someway somehow
Anything but goodybye

There foolish there selfish
why cant they see what i see
I want to make them feel
half of what i feel right now

The possibility of never
knowing of what could have happen
where things could have gone

I want to say so much to you
Wanting to tell you I love you
Its to soon
but im not mistaken
Knowing what my heart is telling me
I just cant..
just cant deal with this anymore


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  • A Summer Depression
    April 3, 2008
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    wow this is beautiful! its sad but totally relatable.
    love it, keep writing!