At every turn I
Find ten lying men for
Every one good hearted
and true man.
At every turn I
Find myself falling
For one of those lying men
and hurting the one good hearted
and true man
At every turn I
Find that I try to
Change these lying men
and turn them into
the good hearted
and true man
Finally I stop
Finally I open my eyes
Finally I see the good heart
Finally I see the one true man
No more will I turn
that corner to only
Find myself falling
for that lying man
No more will I try
to turn them into
The good hearted and
true man
For I have found
my one in ten
I have found my
good hearted and
true man
A contest entry
- Anything you wish by crazymomma.
450 points, ended April 16, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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awesome job I like this so much I feel the same way a lot of times and your last stanza brings hope to me I can relate to this as I did the other one that I read all but the last about finding my one in ten...AWESOME
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great write! keep up the good work here was my favorite part!
"For I have found
my one in ten
I have found my
good hearted and
true man"
i guess it just ties the whole thing together great job!
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