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"Crucify"

Break the hands in spews of blood and bone,
Spirit goes next with whips and chains
Crowns made to torture into obedience
The king of man with no kingdom.

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 1, 2008
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    Wow! This is very deep and thought provoking. Very well written. Best of luck in the contest.