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You Opened Up Your World To Me

You opened up your world to me
You taught me how to love
Your words and care have set me free
With guidance from above

You taught me to caress your soul
You taught us how to feel
Taught me how your heart to hold
And make our love so real

Taught me how to touch you mind
To find its secrets sweet
Let our words become entwined
Our trust it did complete

Showed your beauty from within
And freely gave your heart
Helped our journey to begin
to feel each precious part

I hold you now within my self
Surround you with my care
Allowing you to be yourself
Giving all that we can share

We give our love in many ways
Its special warmth enjoyed
Leaving us to feel loves rays
That never will destroy

You opened up your world to me
You taught me how to be
A special love that we agree
Will set our spirits free

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  • Sandygram silver member
    March 31, 2008

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    Oh My, This is so beautiful. Your words are full of love and caring and I can feel they come from your heart. Friendship is a beautiful thing when shared by two people who love and repect each other the same way. I am blessed to have found such a friend in you. Your poem brings a smile to my heart. God Bless you. True friends are a gift from God. I thank Him for bringing you into my life. Always, Sandy


  • broken-colours
    March 31, 2008
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    This is terribly sweet. Made me think of my true love throughout reading it. It's amazing to find one person that seems to understand you completely, someone that you can dip into and immerse yourself in without reserve. You've expressed this beautifully, with a great flow and a rhyme that doesn't seem awkward or forced. Great job!