i looked outside two minutes ago,
and i realized something was wrong with the world today,
and i know that is just because,
you are not in it in anyway.
i cannot see you or feel you,
and i feel that i am alone.
these people just sit here amazed,
while i smell the remains of your cologne.
i looked at the people around me,
and i realized something was wrong with these people today,
they acted as if they knew you,
no matter what i say.
they tell only what was in their eyes,
something far from what is true,
and i sit here and cannot believe it,
because only i had known you.
i looked at myself in the mirror,
and i realized something was wrong with me today.
i was wearing black and my eyes were blank,
my lightness had faded away.
my make up was smeared with such dignaty,
and i cared not that they stared,
because something was wrong with it all today,
and i was the only one despaired.
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no idea where this came from
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contemporary indeed...
keep sharing your gift.
HENSLEY
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you might not know where it came from but I'm glad that it did this is a very good poem....check back I'm not adding to finalist as of right now....
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i chose this one because it was just really random and i liked it... hmmm... really, i guess i dont know why i chose this one
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I like the idea behind this write. I keep reading it over and over ... I see the word dignaty and am too lazy to find out for certain but I think it is spelled dignity
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amazing. i really like it. the rhyming was good too.
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wow, this is a really good one... although... it kinda confused me because I don't fully know what this is about...
but hey yeah crazy cool da da da da la da daaa la!
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