When I have cut the yellow
ones, the purple,
& one red flower,
I arrange them
& fill the vase with water.
When next you drive,
you will discover it
in your seat.
There is no card attached.
There are only flowers,
the beautiful ones,
& a vase with water.
Please tell me what you think
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Very Good.
What a romantic gesture! I am sure that it's really a lucky person who finds a bouquet of flowers from someone who doesn't have to attach a card...So well thought out, and packed with emotions.
Congrats and best regards!
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Thanks for reading, commenting, and adding me as a favorite. I appreciate it...
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A woman always loves flowers, especially hand-picked ones. I love flowers in poetry too and one of my favourite quotes is "it is at the edge of the petal that love awaits".
Lovely simplicity and a touch of the mysterious here.
~ Nicolette
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It is at the edge of the petal that love awaits... How true. It is at the edge of feelings that love begins. You words send me off in a new direction toward more simplicity and the mysterious that surrounds us...
Thank you so much...
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Direct and simple language has a voice all its own . . . and a nice voice it is. This speaks to intentions and the inner climate of the heart. Nice poem, mt.
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Jaden,
Voice is the one element that takes time to cultivate... grow. Reading your works, and the words of so many good poets on this site--over time--speaks to the truth that you point out...
Thanks...
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nicely done, simple and elegant.
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Thank you...
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