The lights they waver far above
and the music keeps on thumping
all around the kinds of love
that I see when I'm watching
It's so funney that I'm dancing
when your standing all alone
It's so funney that I'm moving
when your living only. . .as. . one
I wish I knew you were single
I wish I would've seen you sooner
I wish that now. . . as our bodies mingle
to the sound . . . a perfect tunner
I'm not sure yet what's happening
I don't really know
my heart rate is quickening
and I'm not watching the show
The other bodies swirling
the music playing on
and by ourselves were moving
moving
together
as one
Author notes
Contest about love. . .I met my boyfreind at prom.
A contest entry
- LOVE IS IN THE AIR.......LET YOUR LOVE HEART SHINE! BIG POINTS!!!!! by ears2hearyou.
1200 points, ended April 11, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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glad to knw i have that effect and that that one night changed both of our lives for the better.
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Very good write
Such an exciting a write
I give you three clappies in writing foe I have no points left I am sorry Im out of them at this time -
Beautiful!
an ahh..the love of prom!
you have a lot of imagery in your poems that is touching
to the heart, keep writing you have a lot to share,
and we'll be ready to read each word and laugh along
with you too!
ears/Seattle
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You spelled funny wrong.lol
But it's all good.
Good job tho.
isn't love magnificent?
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS POEM, IT IS DEFFINATLY YOUR BEST, YOU TOO ARE SO CUTE,LOL. MEZA SO HAPPY FOR YAZ!!!!!!!
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This was really sweet and the emotion in it was very well portrayed in your words.. Great write and good luck!
Jetleena
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