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Tranquility





Trepidation unfetters, amidst a soft serenade of soothing resonance
Romantically rippling across a golden pond
As enchantment consumes all heart's afflictions with
Nature’s glimmering opulence to sweet song
Quaint doves coo love in rhythm to colorful leaves that whisper from
Uplifting winds, softly tossing pallid feathers
In billowing gentleness, they dance along the reservoir,
Lingering in sanctuaries protection
Inspiration flows to wings, comforted by tangerine dreams of a
Tranquil sunrise, compelling soul to fly beyond
Yesterday’s hopes, soaring within an endless sky




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Pic credits: http://www.ppfive.com/media_vault/www.ppfive.com/on%20golden%20pond.jpg

TY Lynda for the word

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  • poppa
    April 8, 2008

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    Beautiful acrostic...captures the sensual softness of the pic so effortlessly...good luck in the contest..


  • Fug-azi
    March 31, 2008

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    Sigh .. The essence of a good acrostic is when you don't even realise it is one, well sis I count myself fortunate to have read this.

    You and Lynda are just so very, very good at writing beauty.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    Beautiful.


  • poet2angels gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    Beautiful!
    Acrostics are so enchanting when flawless...like this one!
    I love every line so soft and soothing this is just like the word it expresses....
    tranquility!
    I love it!

    Lynda

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