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The wind blows all along with me
The cold breeze is piercing into beneath my skin
On a star I lie tonight watching the ceiling going wild
As I walk in between the lights,
With tingling garland in my hair
Something under the roof makes me cry
It gets colder and I wish a cloud can embrace me
A stoned creature lives in my head
There’s a box of dreams on my bed
There’s a place where my secrets are spread
In the backyard all the kids are dead
But I live in a world of wonders instead..
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one of those nights ..
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Through the dark and into the light
I like the way you ended your poem
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like your poem
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i would like to note that Seurge IS a dumbass so there's in no need to the "like" you used my friend, drop it lol.
and now back to you, this piece is wonderful, i loved it very much. i liked the fact that you were sitting on a star and you had a ceiling above your head. i find this image intriguing.
Elie
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oh wow...tephy...wow...
this trip of yours made me so inarticulate i'm smiling like a dumbass
beautiful...just beautiful...and the touch of sadness didnt even hold against the world of wonders...
when you create such art you're God...
love u lil sis !
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There’s a box of dreams on my bed
There’s a place where my secrets are spread
In the backyard all the kids are dead
But I live in a world of wonders instead..
just amazing, theses few lines blew my mind, i liked it so damn much
exellent job, keep it going,
,,,,,,,,,johnny,,,,,,,,,,,,
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i love...
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