Snobs
Old hags
Bitches bark
Arrogant pigs
Drivel useless crap
Inept of wisdom’s speak
Preaching about righteousness
Spewing spiteful stories full of hate
Persistent bartered their worthy cause
Nose in the air .. extreme ignorance taught
Swelling breasts full of a wealthy flaunting
Displaying broach diamond necklace
Bragging mouthfuls of affluence
Sipping brandy tasting sluts
Boring bullshit giving
Sagging lying eyes
Jealous whiners
Clueless whore
Drop dead
Shits
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this is a double etheree form poem, syllable counts of 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1..
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Carlin`s List
When
talking
with dispatch
on radio;
Nice sevens are known
as universally,
with admiration, both eyes
can appreciate;not firmness,
but size;unless they are tucked into
the belt,where they are closer their four.
Too bad we have to revert to this list,
to get our point across when we`re two`ed.
It does bode well for blood pressure,
taking time to send message
in code. The protection
of the virgin eye
is paramount
to you and
of course
I
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nice write!
that was really well put i know wayy too many of those kinds of people
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Yeah I know way to many too. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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haha too funny i hate stuck up chicks this just proves why well said!
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Thanks for reading and commenting. As alway I really appreciate it.
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Excellent
Hot damn.
Who was the one that pissed you off?
LMAO
CK, this is brilliant.
Remind me NOT to get on your bad side.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us.
*S* Cynthia
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haha, I feel so much better after getting this off my chest. Thanks for reading and commenting. As always it is much appreciated.
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this is really cool. I have never written one of these
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Thanks for reading and commenting hiddenpoet19, you'll have to give this a try it's alot of fun, though challenging working with the syllable count. Thanks again.
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Clever!
Oh you clever man!!! You never cease to amaze me, Your writes are getting better every day,It great to see you writting in different forms.I love this form, but I am still trying to work it out and get it right lol.The write holds a lot of anger, I love the word usage, very descriptive indeed.Much enjoyed the read.
Take care and many beautiful blessings to you.
Love ~Angel~
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Thanks for reading and commenting. It is greatly appreciated. This form is so fun I really enjoy it. I feel better now that i have released my anger. Haha.
Lots of love,
Charley.
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Wow!! The anger Charley. I love it. Keep that pen flowing.
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Thank you Guin, I appreciate your reading and commenting.
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Interesting
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Hi, thanks for reading and commenting. Greatly appreciated.
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