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atp...Dear Englishman

Missing image

 

As I linger on the deck

and wait for the fog to clear

I'll see your mystical image

across the big-pond

and wish that you were here

your American

Author notes

Inspired by Leonard Cohen

In a list

A contest entry

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  • deercatcher
    August 5
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    Very nice... succint. Like this comment I will get no credit for...


  • old dog
    April 10, 2008

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    A melancoly longing projected here.
    I believe that makes your poem successful and
    I wish you good luck with this contest.


  • klassy lassy
    April 8, 2008
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    No distance here in this heartspeak.


  • Nicolette gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    Very sweet and filled with a yearning, a longing that so many can relate too. The sea and the fog seem to do that to us...

    Some nice rhyming here too - it falls softly on the ears.

    Thank you for your entry.

    ~ Nicolette


  • arafura gold member
    March 31, 2008
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    Sweet and wistful... Well done my friend. Good luck in the contest!


  • Grateful
    March 31, 2008

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    wonderful thoughts breeze through your words that created the cheerful poem...best of luck in the contest.

  • grm
    March 31, 2008
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    simple yearning...what everyone can relate to

    thanks for entering

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