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diarrhea

dyarea iz so pretty
lyk a slushie of rottin kondimentz
in a stew of luv end last nitez yorkshyre puding

lyk a beutifull ranebaue
in mi toylet boal

lyk a muddy see stroon with brite oringe kelp
toarn 2 bitz by mi watry kolon;
a see dat cumfirtz mi in my dispere
in my pane
of letting bownteous rivarz floe
frum my TOrtURed bowals
to nurish teh ded erth.

Author notes

i want to throw up now. :/

hiraeth.

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  • lifeistoshort
    April 15

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    :/ more of how i felt at the time didnt really care where it went spelling or its rhyimg or what not i dont think a poem can be judged on that

    • hiraeth
      April 15
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      ...er, you could send a message with stuff like that.

  • AmyPixiStix
    April 2

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    this poem is crazy, i had this one called, run, it was about that same thing, congrats on your trophy, keep writing, -Amy


  • Irial
    March 31
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    fun, slimy... runny... with an added flavor of win.
    =)

  • ForeverLastingComa
    March 31
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    OMG!! LMFAO!! this is hilarious..=p good luck

  • Puking Faerie Dust gold member
    March 31

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    OOmgZZZ tihs iz TOETALLII MII FAVE POOEM EVAR!!!!!111!!?//!! n puedin iz frekan AWSUM!!!! now u r mii bestst frand 4 lyf!!1


  • amy86
    March 31
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    yuk

    didnt eat before hand, made me gag though. well done for such a 'horrible' poem

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