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Desert Cactus (PhotoKu Senryu vari.)

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Desert Cactus

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I think most of you will get the "point"..... lol    
Written December 7th, 2003

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  • Ghost of a Siren
    December 14, 2003
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    Lovely!


  • BrokenSouledPoetess
    December 8, 2003
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    Cool pic and haiku here Don. I haven't seen cactus around for awhile. I miss them That is what I get for growing up in the desert and then moving to the midwest

    ~Rain


  • Naughtygrlred
    December 8, 2003
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    love your pick sweet haiku


  • Sara Bellem
    December 7, 2003
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    Ouch This reminds me of my personal story of a catcus that I sat on ( yes, I sat on one!...lol) when I was seven years old & it was quite painful & embarrassing when my two older brothers had to get those little needle things out of my behind! Anyways, even though this reminded me of "that" experience it still put a smile on my face and I definitely got the point! Nice picture ---Sara


  • sock monkey
    December 7, 2003
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    I'm not gonna be the one to take that cactus away from its family! reminds me of a picture on my wall, cooool.


  • Brian N
    December 7, 2003
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    nice work Don - I really like that photo - the shot is very clear and the colors are great ~ peace, b


  • December 7, 2003
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    hehe... reminds me so much of where I live.... in the desert surounded by cactus. Cactus are the unseen and ignored beauty of the desert... dumb people just can't see how perfect they are in their own way. great job!
    -paige-

  • cloudydreams
    December 7, 2003
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    Nice job! Loved the picture that went along with it- it really completed the whole thing!


  • myrataal silver member
    December 7, 2003
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    Hallo Mr MasterMonk

    You did it again!

    Wizard of words and images - salute!

    Myra


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 7, 2003
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    I love all the pictures you post my friend, and the words you pen capture the moment and meaning so much more than I usually see words do, and I thank you for the talent in you, and once again, I'm glad you share it here, atleast some of it, heehee!

    Another amazing piece!
    -Timothy


  • Arepetianz
    December 7, 2003
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    Nice

    I like the last line. Very nice write, and nice image. The desert here blooms big-time in the winter. I love it here.

  • Seraph1885
    December 7, 2003
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    LOL! nice picture... I have never seen a cactus before so yeah cool... I think I get the point inspiration Master Monk.
    Love
    Mal

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