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Boys Being Boys

flattened penny
on train tracks
mischief

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  • Draig aine gold member
    June 16
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    well penned my friend


  • DogFish silver member
    April 19
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    Poingant!

    ...brings suddenly to life the memory of the experiment all little boys have tried!


  • Pollycheck
    March 31, 2008

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    Thank you for enteering my haiku contest.

    flattened penny
    on train tracks
    mischief

    This haiku brings back many memories for me, but it is getting harder and harder to even find the tracks anymore.


  • Dragonbabyx3
    March 31, 2008

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    Beutiful, Brings back memories of playing on the tracks looking for fossils with my dad Great imagery as well!