The psycho awoke
to a stirring in his brain
a throbbing in his groin
as he thought of the pain
that he would inflict
on the world that shunned his mind
a slave to no woman
as he left the world behind
cleans his blades, hunt to kill
slits their throats
to get his fill
he's slick and smart
he remains uncaught
so many heroes he has
Manson's insanity
Bundy's love of skin
enticing
Devour the soul of them all
set free the beast within
I try to find
humanity inside
try to see what he used to be
But the killer has taken his mind
and no longer can be
a father to me
A contest entry
- ||[Erotic_Murder]|| by Synthetic-Nightmare.
1300 points, ended April 20, 2008, 22 entries
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try not to hurt my feelings
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Affection for one that taints the whole of humanitys image ?
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intersting
that was great,i loved the psychological references of it,im kinda obsessed with serial killers. -
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lol, nice comment
I like serial killers...my father only killed once...my brother
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hi this is meeeeeeeeee x
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WoW!?!
i dont no what to think good though definately good...
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WHOA......
THIS WAS TRULY GRIPPING and intense,
and what's all the more intense is the fact that you tagged this piece as "personal."
IS there a story behind this??
Like, is your father truly like this in any way?
Thanks so much for your entry,
this is powerful and well written. I love your references to actual serial killers
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